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This is my final that I did for class. I'll be adding a mag later, plus some touch ups here and there, but whatcha think?

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Tue Jun 15, 2010 7:49 pm
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It looks so awesome! :shock:


Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:20 pm
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Awesome! You did really well!

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Mind...blown..my..is??????????????????????????????????????

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Post Re: Need feedback for my class project
His right arm and leg (on our left side) look a little more detached than I would expect them to be, making the transition from the torso to those segments a bit awkward.

I can't really think of anything else at the moment to comment on if you're looking for ways to improve it.

In any case, this is pretty nicely done.


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Looks awesome :D
If you decide to go through with the mag thing, make sure you post the update.

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Wed Jun 16, 2010 10:51 pm
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Awesome, It looks really good. I'd give you an A+ ;P


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I think it's really nice. I hope you get a good grade.


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i like it alot (especially since hucast is my fav class :P).
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i do like the dark feel it gives me but he looks a bit stiff like his right arm for instance
the chainsawd is a little bigger than i imagined it would be at least in the handle area
the chest area could also use a LITTLE bit more depth but none the less its an amazing work of art :)


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Yeah, I kno the Chainsawd is a bit thick, but that will be fixed later. It was more something to get my instructor off my hind end about not having something to match his "tiny crotch" as he put it...We all swear he's gay, but that's not the point. I drew this as a quicky using one of my bf's screenshots of the Soul Eater skin on his HUcast, and I modded it from there. I agree the leg looks kinda wonky, and that one shoulder thinger, but otherwise this is the first piece of art I've done that I'm actually proud of. Now to work on the Agastya mag...lol I will finish him! :) Thanks for the feedback, like for serious! :D

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