I'm totally going to stalk you DA now ;o
Looks rather interesting. Design screenshots are rather cool as well. I'd totally offer to help work on it but I don't know if you'd even need any help lol XD
I do recall seeing this a little while ago too; I can't wait for the next test you share of it :D
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On to teh proofreading:
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| Quote: Solve a ton of puzzles by combining elements to create unique potions. | |
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I would use 'tons' because it sounds more exciting!
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| Quote: Create new elements using the elements on your stack. | |
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Although I am unfamiliar with what you mean by 'stack,' maybe the following may be better:
"Merge elements from your collection to create awesome new elements!"
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| Quote: Use special items for unforeseen effects. | |
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Unforseen is not a word I stumble across too often. It has hints of negative effects to it as well (unforseen issues will arise...). Depending on the context you are using,
"Using special items will cause various effects to occur, such as [list of an effect or two]."
may be more valid for your purposes. You could just swap out 'unforseen' for 'various.'
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https://dl.dropbox.com/u/69084784/combine_1.png
Missing preposition --> "Create new elements by mixing existing ones!"